THE BLACK HOLE

THE BLACK HOLE

I was at the printer doing some printing. Suddenly the printer started to play up on me. So then I kicked it hard but not too hard. My eyes were rolling me to sleep but just then BANG the printer started working again.

Suddenly the printer printed a large black hole. I put my cup down on the black hole and BOOM the cup fell in the hole. I reached in the hole and grabbed my cup back.

Then I went up to the vending machine and put the hole up against the glass of the machine. I carefully put my hand though the black hole and took a chocolate bar. It was a snicker. Then I tiptoed to the door, reached in and opened the door. I was so exited. I ran up to the safe and stuck the black hole onto the safe door and grabbed all the money I could. I felt guilty for helping myself.

Before I could turn back the paper hole had slipped off the safe door. I was trapped! I felt scared, worried and nervous. How was I going to escape?

By Leah Culff

The Black Hole

I was working in a big, black room, my eyes started to roll. I was very tired, my head was pounding telling me to drift off to sleep. On that cold day I was at the photocopier doing some office work when the photocopier played up. The piece of paper I was photocopying had a black hole in it. I was terrified.

When I was having a drink, I put it down because I finished it. It landed on the piece of paper. It fell straight though! I bent down to see if I could see the cup through the paper. I could. Then I scarily placed my hand though the terrifying piece of paper. I could. I was shocked when my hand suspiciously fitted though the amazing thing.

I ran over to the vending machine. I taped the black hole up to the vending machine and reached my hand though and got a delicious snickers bar. I eat the entire lovely and delicious snickers bar.

Then I thought. I ran excitedly over to the boss’s door. I pinned the piece of amazing paper up to the door and I pulled the handle and I opened the door. When I looked around I saw the safe. The safe had millions of cash in it. I put the black hole against the safe and started pulling out all the cash. Then I got a bit too greedy and I accidently fell in, then the black hole slipped off the big silver safe. I was still in there in till this day when my boss came and saved me.

                       By Sam Upton

THE BLACK HOLE

THE BLACK HOLE

By Jessica Pratt

  I was still at work staring into space at 10:30pm waiting for the work that I had done earlier to print. But it wasn't. After a couple of minutes I kicked the printer and an A3 piece of paper came out. I felt confused. On the large piece of paper there was a black circle. I drank the rest of my drink and placed it on the circle. The drink disappeared. I realised the circle was like a black hole. I reached into the black hole and pulled my  drink out.

   I walked towards the chocolate vending machine. The coast was clear. I stuck the black hole on to the glass of the vending machine. I slowly reached into the black hole and pulled out the first chocolate I could feel. It was a snicker. Then I remembered there was a safe in my boss's office.

  I hurried towards the door. It was locked. So I stuck the black hole on to the door then reached into the black hole then opened the door. In front of me was the safe. What was in there? Was it money? I was so tempted. I walked towards it. The safe was locked. So I stuck the hole on to the door of the safe. I reached into the safe. There was money in it. I could be rich. I pulled out all of the money. When I thought it was all gone to double check I had all of it I decided to get all of my body the safe. When my whole body was in to my surprise the black hole fell off. I was trapped.

THE BLACK HOLE

THE BLACK HOLE

At 9:30 I was still at work. I was all alone doing a night shift. Suddenly the printer stopped working so I kicked it hard with my foot .I kicked it so hard, it worked but then a black hole appeared from the side of the broken printer. Then I carefully put my cup down and it suddenly fell through the hole. So I just double checked if any one was around and I put the hole against the vending machine and got a snickers bar. I sneaked up to the safe and took the money I popped my head through to see if there was any money left and fell in the safe and the black hole fell off I was stuck and scared encase my boss found me .

By Luey Murray

The Black Hole

I was working late at my job. Then a noise came from the printer. It was rumbling so I kicked it .Then a black hole came out. I went to get a drink of water and put it on the black hole and my drink straight through.

So I sneakily walked towards the vending machine. I took the first chocolate bar I could get. It was snickers. Then I saw a safe. Should I or shouldn’t I take the money? I did it. Then I was stuck in the safe. What should I do?

By Jayden Joyce

THE BLACK HOLE

I was so tired and the printer was not working so I kicked it. Then a hole came out. I thought it was just a black hole. Suddenly I placed my cup on it and it slipped through the black hole. I was startled. I sneakily placed the black hole on the vending machine and grabbed the first chocolate bar I could get. It was a Mars bar. Then I saw a safe. Should I or shouldn’t I steal the hidden treasures?

I opened the safe with the black hole and took all the money.

Then I got locked in and I couldn’t get out again. I never want use the black hole again.

By Katie Mellowes.

THE BLACK HOLE

A sleep deprived office worker finds a Black Hole whilst photocopying late one night. Suddenly the possibilities seem endless. Will greed get the better of him?

How does the office worker feel throughout the trailer?

Class Dojo

Adam Lowther and Imogen Sawers won the Class Dojo prize this week!

With 9 points each, Adam and Imogen demonstrated fantastic effort and participation throughout the week!

Superb classroom behaviour, a great role model for their peers.

Class DOJO

Francesca Russen received the highest amount of points for her avatar last week!

Fantastic work and great participation! Well done!

Charlie and the chocolate factory is on ITV2! 6.45-9.00

Dilemmas in the Chocolate Factory

Charity Stalls

Today was the Panthers and Jaguars Charity Stalls.
Together as a class the Panthers managed to raise £32.92
Well done us!

DANGLE

How is the man feeling throughout this video clip?
What is his dilemma?

Homework!

Homework 15–06-12

Year 4, your homework this week is to write a character description of the balaclava boy. Think carefully about the story and how his feelings change throughout. Remember to use full sentences using a range sentence openers and adjectives.

Post your homework on the blog or complete on paper to be handed in on Monday.

Remember to peer assess other children’s character descriptions using 3 stars and a rocket!

I’ll look forward to reading them soon J

Panthers Assembly Song

We live we learn – Panthers Assembly Song

Determination, were here to stay.

Unite the Panthers, let’s show the way.

Heart pumping, everybody’s jumping.

To the beat the music yeah!

Keep running gotta keep humming.

To the beat the music yeah!

The campfires burning in all our hearts.

We’ve come to Freiston, together it starts.

Stand up coz your dream is worth fighting for. 

Yes! Shout loud, be proud and sing once more.

So lift your heart and your spirit your spirit

And you will find your way.

We live we learn can you feel it you feel it.

Speak through your heart and live for today.

Ba Ba Ba Ba Da Ba Ba Da ………

We are the Panthers, this is our song.

When Miss Brown sang it, she wasn’t wrong.

Heart pumping, everybody’s jumping.

To the beat the music yeah!

Keep running gotta keep humming.

To the beat the music yeah!

Don’t be afraid now, follow your dreams.

Stay on the beat now, and join our team.

Stand up coz your dream is worth fighting for. 

Yes! Shout loud, be proud and sing once more.

So lift your heart and your spirit your spirit

And you will find your way.

We live we learn can you feel it you feel it.

Speak through your heart and live for today.

Ba Ba Ba Ba Da Ba Ba Da ………

Its Panthers time, our chance to shine.

Dare you join us here, at the starting line.

Champions, yeah, yeah.

And were hear to learn, that’s the bottom line.

Face your fears, stand side by side.

Follow your dreams, and keep hold of your pride.

Go-tta smile on my face, feeling so a-live.

We live, we learn, raise your hand up high.

So lift your heart and your spirit your spirit

And you will find your way.

We live we learn can you feel it you feel it.

Speak through your heart and live for today.

Ba Ba Ba Ba Da Ba Ba Da ………

Freiston Residential

This afternoon Year 4 have taken time to write a personal recount of their favourite day at Freiston!

These diary entries include feelings, emotions, memorable highlights and vivid descriptive detail of their trip.

Enjoy Reading J

Jubilee bank Holiday

Hello Year 4,

What fantastic things did you get up to for our Queens diamond Jubilee?

I'm sure all the Panthers would love to find out! :-)

Post your comment below.

Our School Jubilee Day



Year 4's trip to Freiston

28th - 30th May 2012

Olympic Maths

Over the next week the children will participate in small groups a range of Olympic sporting events. In their teams they will have to measure distance and time, present their data and use a variety of enquiry skills. Task 1 - Push the Ball Comment below and share with others what we had to do and what we found out.

http://wallwisher.com/wall/panthersmdcps

Check this out!

http://www.bbc.co.uk/cbbc/shows/deadly-60

Miss Brown and the Panthers had a fantastic day at Jewry Wall. Year 4, it would be great if you could write a comment about what you enjoyed the most?

Hi Panthers, this is Miss Brown! This is your new class blog to showcase all of our learning worldwide! Explore and enjoy!