Today Year 4 have been creating persuasive adverts in the style of M&S using some of the key features! They are fantastic, have a listen to Maddies, Katies M and Imogens.
Comment below if you spot any of the key features identified in our wallwisher.
Comment below if you spot any of the key features identified in our wallwisher.
I really enjoyed doing the emotive writing, i liked the dogs trust and how it said moon pig . com
ReplyDeleteICE-CREAM SUNDAE
ReplyDeleteThis is most gorgeous of all food that you must try. Our delicious, rich ice cream melts in your mouth with the flavour of chocolate, vannilla and strawberry. It is drizzeld with toffee sauce which adds another flavour to this food. You will just have by more and more. To finnish, it is topped with a crispy wafour slice. But hurry up, because stocks close on the 12th of May. Remember, this is not just food, this is your M & S food, enjoy!
Do you deserve this delightful, chocolately treat?
ReplyDeleteA rich, moist, delicious Belgian chocolate sponge. The finest quality chocolate sponge you'll have ever tasted. Topped with a seriously, silky, smooth and creamy caramel sauce.
This isn't just any dessert this is a M&S chocolate dessert!
Belgian chocolate sponge . . . YUM YUM, I'm hungry now ! !
DeleteApple crumble.
ReplyDeleteCome and try our lovely apple crumble.It has the sweetest brambly apples.Delicous on its own even beter with melt in your mouth vanila ice cream mmmmmm.Only avalible at m&s stores.your M&S food.
Cheese cake!
ReplyDeleteDo you want a creamy treat?Then why don't you try this amazing,creamy,crunchy cheese cake full of lots of amazing flavours and sweetness.This gorgeous pudding is the best in the world,you will save three pounds when you buy it now for only one pound eighty!This brilliant offer ends 20th of May.This is not just normal pudding,its M&S pudding!
mmmmmmmmmmmm your making my mouth water!!
DeleteWhat a brilliant idea Panthers! I love your M&S inspired advert. Year 5 at Stickney are currently learning about persuasive writing, I shall show them your brilliant work! Well done!
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